A Tamil Verse

Hi folks and chums this is my second tamil verse ever. The first one is too gross:)))))) so I shall take the liberty of posting only this which I just struck up. No brickbats please;))))))

Marupadiyum Yemaandhuvitaayey
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aey penney!
nee yedharkkaaga pirandhaai?
maanidanaal unakku yevvalavu innalgal,
unnai pandamaatru porulaagavey ninaikkiraargal
nalla yosithu paar,
netru dhaaney kaadhalar dhinam,
oruvan unakku oru arpa malar chendai koduthu
un vilai madhipillaa idhayathai keyttaan!

anbudan
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